Reflection on Argument Essay

Paper Reflection:
            The process of this paper was mainly two large chunks.  I did roughly half of it in two segments and then put it up for peer revising.  My paper wasn’t entirely long enough so I had to find some strategies to lengthen it effectively.  Through peer advising and my two meetings with Professor Darling I discovered that I could expand upon some points I already made to effectively lengthen my essay.  This worked well as I expanded on a couple of paragraphs and added more details and more of my own opinions.  I feel like adding my own opinions really added another layer of depth to my paper as a whole.  I really thought the peer editing and professor meetings really helped advance and improve my paper.
Through this paper I feel like I really learned more about the process of bringing about change in society in both the past and present.  I learned that education and hope are necessary to bring about change.  Active participation and doing the small things really do make a change and bring about bigger and better things in the end.  Rosa Parks didn’t bring about the civil rights movement in one day on a bus.  She did many little things throughout the course of her live to bring about the dramatic change that was the civil rights union.  Little by little things change.  For example how to you eat an elephant? “One bite at a time.”  This quote shows that to accomplish great and seemingly impossible tasks you have to just do a little bit at a time and you will eventually achieve you goal.  This paper taught me how just one person can ignite change and bring others on the ride with them using the elements of education, hope, and social change.




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